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Tharlam Gyatso

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A Thousand Suns

    As is the case with most poetry from the heart and a dedicated mind, I could only truly critique it should I have even a basic understanding of its underlying ...

    Jun 25, 2008
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Not Alone.

    It is a funny old situation I find myself in with your work, Alicia. On the one hand I have the energy to remain your harshest critic until the very ...

    Jun 25, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: In the early hours.

    This certainly is a very graphic, colorful poem. For that I am thankful to have read it. Despite my being in agreement with the above comments concerning the break of ...

    Jun 24, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Insomnia

    I think this is a rather good poem, all in all. At first I was a little turned off by the stark rhyming of the opening stanza, but once it ...

    Jun 24, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: missing you

    There has obviously been a lot of feeling poured into this poem and I admire that very much. From someone whom misses the physical presence of his wife at the ...

    Jun 24, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Child of A War-Torn Country

    This is a very harsh poem and a lot of the time, to me, it sounds like you are shouting. I feel this acts a bit like a double edged ...

    Jun 24, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: what if

    I dare say that this poem had a lovely 'bounce' to it. The rhythm came across like song and I could see myself singing it as I walked through the ...

    Jun 24, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: what are homosexuals for?

    Well, Medusa. It has to be said. That was a wonderful piece. I confess it is not in a style that would normally appeal to me, but this worked. This ...

    Jun 24, 2008


worlds buzz over us like bees, / we be splendid in new bones.
— Lucille Clifton